Title: The Haiku Challenge
Post by: JessW on May 20, 2009, 03:26:55 pm
OK, so here goes, as per Gee's PM dare!
I set the challenge to all those here or there present to use for DD forum as much as they like, so long as it is all in some for of Haiku.
As opening batter, my contribution is:
The sun is shining
Gee is bored witless
the end of the day!
I set the challenge to all those here or there present to use for DD forum as much as they like, so long as it is all in some for of Haiku.
As opening batter, my contribution is:
The sun is shining
Gee is bored witless
the end of the day!
Title: Re: The Haiku Challenge
Post by: Dusty * on May 20, 2009, 03:55:59 pm
Big boss away
Naughty Dusty plays
there goes another day
Title: Re: The Haiku Challenge
Post by: gee4 on May 20, 2009, 03:59:50 pm
Ah Jess you have a contestant!!
Title: Re: The Haiku Challenge
Post by: JessW on May 20, 2009, 04:13:27 pm
Oops
Nice try, but needs work.
try:
Big boss is away
relaxed Dusty dreams all
another dusk starts!
(I love it when the big cat's away!)
Haiku rules - 5 syllables on 1st line, 7 syllables on 2nd and 5 syllables on third!, and they don't necessarily rhyme (sp?)at all.
Come on Gee!
Nice try, but needs work.
try:
Big boss is away
relaxed Dusty dreams all
another dusk starts!
(I love it when the big cat's away!)
Haiku rules - 5 syllables on 1st line, 7 syllables on 2nd and 5 syllables on third!, and they don't necessarily rhyme (sp?)at all.
Come on Gee!
Title: Re: The Haiku Challenge
Post by: gee4 on May 20, 2009, 04:20:03 pm
Big boss is away
Gee is on the way home now
Bye bye for today...
Gee is on the way home now
Bye bye for today...