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JessW
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« on: May 20, 2009, 04:13:27 pm »
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Nice try, but needs work.

try:

Big boss is away
relaxed Dusty dreams all
another dusk starts!

(I love it when the big cat's away!)

Haiku rules - 5 syllables on 1st line, 7 syllables on 2nd and 5 syllables on third!, and they don't necessarily rhyme (sp?)at all.

Come on Gee!
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